dkl4335, welcome-
So glad to see a new face contributing here. I like the title of your treatment and the log line has gotten my attention. I'm going to take it with me on a camping trip next week and come back with my thoughts.
Also, I wouldn't worry about the length. Treatments are tending to be longer these days. Partly because with larger, fx heavy films, you have to be pretty descriptive, even in the early goings, so the producer/studio/financiers have a good idea what the price tag will be, and so that set/character/production designers have more to work with.
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And remember- no matter what ANYONE says, not your next door neighbor or the head of Warner Bros.- keep at it. Eventually, you will succeed-
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07-29-2010, 11:38 PM
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