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I liked it! But it would be hard!

Yikes- all those celebrities. I don't know, unless it were a cartoon. But it seems too serious for that. I think it maybe doesn't need to look like a "presentation". It kind of looks like powerpoint slides to me! I wrote my treatment based on ones I saw and kept it pretty plain.

But it's a nice story! And after Benjamin Button we know they have the technology to make old actors look young again (Brad Pitt . . . wow- he looked like he did in Thelma and Louise- wow) so anything is possible.

Do you have more? And please check out my first submission (Turbo Boost) and let me know what you think guys! Thanks!