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Good to have you, halschaefer!
We all appreciate you sharing your work with us. I am going to read it tomorrow and will let you know what I think soon. You should go on over to the Introduce Yourself forum and tell us a little about yourself. A question I have for you is: "Is this your first treatment?" In any event, welcome to the site and keep the treatments coming-
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Yes, this is my first "treatment", as I imagine it does not follow a true Hollywood treatment format. Likewise, it needs some (character/plot) development, etc. Anyone is welcome to help......
However, it is based on my personal experiences here in New Canaan, CT, and I hope you agree it does pose some possibilities, both comical, and socio-economic statements. And I kid you not, the police force here is outfitted even more than in Beverly Hills Cop, but they have a nasty attitude. |
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