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Old 11-23-2010, 05:08 AM
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A "friendly" wager has a wealthy suburban police force exchange positions with a hardened New York City bunch of cops. The ensuing scenarios leads to humorous interactions and exchanges with the respective civilian populations, while at the same time the drama makes cultural observations of the two disparate communities that are nonetheless in incredible close proximity to one another. While this "treatment" needs development, the possibilities abound....
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Old 11-28-2010, 01:47 AM
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Welcome halschaefer, hope you enjoy the forum and thanks for submitting your treatment for our members to read.
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Old 11-28-2010, 05:34 AM
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Thank you Marc-
I could not even find my own post/"treatment".
I need to learn how to better navigate the site.
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Old 11-30-2010, 02:59 AM
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Good to have you, halschaefer!

We all appreciate you sharing your work with us. I am going to read it tomorrow and will let you know what I think soon.

You should go on over to the Introduce Yourself forum and tell us a little about yourself. A question I have for you is: "Is this your first treatment?"

In any event, welcome to the site and keep the treatments coming-
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Old 11-30-2010, 05:03 AM
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Yes, this is my first "treatment", as I imagine it does not follow a true Hollywood treatment format. Likewise, it needs some (character/plot) development, etc. Anyone is welcome to help......
However, it is based on my personal experiences here in New Canaan, CT, and I hope you agree it does pose some possibilities, both comical, and socio-economic statements. And I kid you not, the police force here is outfitted even more than in Beverly Hills Cop, but they have a nasty attitude.
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